Comments on: it’s not polite

By: matthew

matthew — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 16:21:55 +0000

The luminous gaze sharpens.
Hey jealous Luna…
put a cork in it!

The moment stretches
until finally…
“WHAT!? Is something on my face?”

By: Amanda

Amanda — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 10:35:32 +0000

I see the moon shine
the moon sees me. Staring eyes
glare forever downwards

Many say its he
the man in the moon but no
she gazes with love

In mythology the moon has always been called a girl. All of the incarnations of the moon are goddesses but modern day has changed it into a man. The man in the moon. But the moon is what controls the tides both womanly tides and the ocean idk rambling thoughts and little sleep.

By: Jim Morey

Jim Morey — Wed, 17 Jun 2009 19:04:36 +0000

a-e-i-o-u?
your distractions are weak, moon!
we play for moon boots.

By: Seraphine

Seraphine — Wed, 17 Jun 2009 17:50:49 +0000

stars like zits nearby
big face in an airless sky
stare o’ luna pie

By: justme

justme — Wed, 17 Jun 2009 17:18:07 +0000

ghostly white moonbeams
drawing their rapturous gaze
voyeuristically

they, staring, entranced
at radiant selene;
she is not amused

By: matthew

matthew — Wed, 17 Jun 2009 15:49:49 +0000

Being a beauty
tends to leave little room for
intelligent thought

As the lovers kissed
they felt they were being watched
and so turned to see…….