Comments on: rodent drum circle (haiku)

By: ghmtrm

ghmtrm — Mon, 07 Apr 2008 15:29:45 +0000

i need IDEAS about a haiku poem about drumming. i am writing a short book of poems and i need some ideas. thanx

ghmtrm — Mon, 07 Apr 2008 15:28:07 +0000

hi i need a poem about drumming please

lamer — Tue, 18 Dec 2007 00:42:19 +0000

The beat in my brain
Is better than today’s pop
Where is my contract?

Rodro — Sun, 02 Dec 2007 21:26:51 +0000

Skull pounded out by
Mickey and his evil friends
Resonance within

calan — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 17:53:05 +0000

coolio – unwhole is definitely a word.

jimmy – first post and a double haiku, yay!

thanks for the haikus everyone

jimmy — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 17:41:49 +0000

im a mouse right now
drumming in this cave of mine
got a record deal

hope it doesnt suck
then i will be really broke
then i’ll want to squeel

Starguy — Thu, 29 Nov 2007 05:34:00 +0000

Mice drumming in head
It has good rythem to it
Dance to head music

coolioness — Wed, 28 Nov 2007 23:18:12 +0000

Mice drums and chanting-
echoing in my skull, yet
I am still unwhole.

…Is unwhole even a word?

Seraphine — Wed, 28 Nov 2007 17:20:42 +0000

vivid acoustics
sound vibrates my body- nooo
it’s my alarm clock

reaching snooze button
i find skin and bone instead
most excellently

Wed, 28 Nov 2007 08:03:09 +0000

penetrating sound
overwhelming resonance
rhythmic pulsations