Comments on: passion haiku

By: Marita

Marita — Mon, 26 Feb 2007 02:43:43 +0000

Once they said to me
Happy Valentin….Dear God!
Is that an organ?

By: calan

calan — Sun, 04 Feb 2007 23:16:20 +0000

intoxicated
gatherings around the tv
super bowl sunday

fortunate am i
to have such clever readers
amuse me with words

By: justme

justme — Sun, 04 Feb 2007 21:57:18 +0000

Just like Gingerdead
Stinkoman Eighty-Seven,
you’re a girly-man

Speaking in Haiku
five syllables, seven, five,
doesn’t make it art;

to find irony
in so few syllables, though,
takes talent. Bravo.

By: Stinkoman87

Stinkoman87 — Sun, 04 Feb 2007 11:29:10 +0000

In my own opinion
Haikus are for big sissys
Oh wait- God dammit!

By: justme

justme — Sun, 04 Feb 2007 09:52:50 +0000

Ooh, a cookie? yum
Wait, carnivorous cookie?
Maybe not so good…

Maybe it depends-
Gingerdead or Vendetta?
Scary either way.

Or maybe you were
speaking metaphorically-
in which case, um, thanks?

By: calan

calan — Sun, 04 Feb 2007 09:14:50 +0000

hi new visitor
may i give you a cookie?
careful, it bites back.

By: justme

justme — Sun, 04 Feb 2007 04:16:39 +0000

First-time visitor
What a way to start me off
I’ll be coming back

By: Marco

Marco — Fri, 02 Feb 2007 21:11:10 +0000

Boogie woogie wu
boogie woogie woogie wu
i cant write haikus…

(neither can I take that cursed song from Insane Clown Posse off my mind, apparently…. if only Lenoir could poke through my head… still a good song though. Ow. Head hurts. Stream of conciousnes. Must sleep. Hey wait!)

My head kinda hurts
typing stream of conciousness
I must sleep, hey wait!

By: calan

calan — Fri, 02 Feb 2007 07:15:53 +0000

strangers exhale words
gobbled up like chocolates
insatiable me

By: Fassin

Fassin — Fri, 02 Feb 2007 06:35:06 +0000

Imagination,
Skewed, broken mind.
Wonderful eyes.